working on a new story called the collector for the horror fans
i have been typing away at several new stories and a few unfinished ones. got a new cyberpunk piece i am working on that i really enjoy writing. and been spending loads of time trying to attain a hot dog cart.
i have spent the past ten days working on several new stories
1. pawn shop : a post apocalyptic tale about 6 people in the Nevada desert who risk their lives entering the zombie infested city of lost vegas to loot a pawn shop 30+ years after the virus hits.
2. (untitled) : story about a teenager caught up in circumstance as his friends start a killing spree
3. untitled: a crime thriller about a detective who is on the trail of a Shakespeare quoting serial killer who always ends his pastern by killing the investigating officer
I am in the process of self publishing a collection of short stories called tales from the crossroads. i will keep you updated.
When I put up a piece for critique I don’t want praise. I want unbiased and uncensored opinion about what the reader thinks does and does not work with the story maybe even why it does or does not work. Just telling me i love it or i hated it tells me nothing about where i went right or wrong.